You surprise me Amber. Kudos.

Awesome Amber..really like stories..

Nice.

wow!!!!
nice work there.
you should think of start writing professionally.

remember "diamond shumsher" and his sets of books on similar historic encounters.
reminded me of "basanti, seto baagh" ... and what happens with those girls... (O:

common amber you should not be "saying last post for the summer".
Visit sajha...... it will be our loss.

very touching Her voice quivering, she uttered, “Jau timharu Pani” and opened the cage.
seems like she knew when she was gonna go !!!!

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as always
what do i know (O:

Good one. Happy summer. And hope after summer you will keep your stories coming as I will be waiting for them. ;)

Very engaging narration!
The way you blended your flawlessness with the complexity of the main character captivated me till the last line, and the last line made me feel totally blank ......

Amber
pleeeeeease donot say this is your last post for summer :)

Anyway, Happy summer!!

epic piece! a reader is made to get into the skin of the character and it's a great asset a writer can have. you have it!

i am feeling the heat :P. don't leave...we need some shades and solace from the excruciating heat of summer :D :P

Being in her own little sanctuary, she was not ready for the outer world. But the life long solitude prepared her to step out of the life and the world in such an ease.
As always, I loved how you show the picture of the society through a character and the minute details that speak so loud.

You have a nice Summer. We wil miss you a lot.

SunnyDev

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Yes. I am interested in the society within the Durbar now. Hope, i get to read from an inside perspective, some day.

this story inspired me to do only one thing: walk out of this thread. just plain boring.

Your stories are absolutely OUTSTANDING!!!
WOW!!!! OK, now keep going!
Admirer

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